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Re: 7th chapter 7/29 

 Cheyenne101 wrote

Awesome Song! I write my own songs too! I Love It! Post More Soon!

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I don't write songs..i just sing them. I don't have that talent to write songs.

yeah i don't think i hav talent to write songs either!! i just kinda wrote it cause i didn't feel like copying anyone's song!! because usually when i try to write a song i end up hating it then throwing it away!


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 Carissa wrote

Awsome!

I loved the thing about the chart and tooth fairy!

Post more soon!

thanx!!


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New Post 7/30/2008 5:44 PM
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Re: 7th chapter 7/29 

i'm thinkin u should post soon :D

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New Post 7/31/2008 9:27 PM
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kk guys!!!! the next chapter should be up 2morrow!! (you can all start happy dancing now!!!jk lol) i'm going school shopping in the morning (i hav to go back to school August 20th!!! i do not like that at all. and on the 19th i'm going to a jonas brothers concert!! soo idc if i'm up till 12am and it's a school night!) anywho the next chapter should be around mid-day if not later(depending on wat time zone you live in) oh and i'm going to camp from august 10th - 16th sooo no updates unless i get my friend to do it...which she might!! and that's it!!! im gonna go get myself some chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream..YAY!!Bye


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Re: 7th chapter 7/29 

 *Demi*Is*Awesome wrote

kk guys!!!! the next chapter should be up 2morrow!! (you can all start happy dancing now!!!jk lol) i'm going school shopping in the morning (i hav to go back to school August 20th!!! i do not like that at all. and on the 19th i'm going to a jonas brothers concert!! soo idc if i'm up till 12am and it's a school night!) anywho the next chapter should be around mid-day if not later(depending on wat time zone you live in) oh and i'm going to camp from august 10th - 16th sooo no updates unless i get my friend to do it...which she might!! and that's it!!! im gonna go get myself some chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream..YAY!!Bye

Yeah! I hope you get it up tomorrow!

I have no idea when school startes! Haha!

I think I have to go school shoping tomorrow, but I may not.


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New Post 8/1/2008 10:13 AM
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! (happy scream with happy dances)

I now have over a 1000 post on here! WOOH HOOO! :D :D I've work so hard...lol

Yeah! Can't wait for a chapter!

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Re: 7th chapter 7/29 

 Rachel wrote

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! (happy scream with happy dances)

I now have over a 1000 post on here! WOOH HOOO! :D :D I've work so hard...lol

Yeah! Can't wait for a chapter!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)

Whooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Go Rachel!

I have like 80 post left till I reach 1000!


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Modified By *Demi*Is*Awesome  on 8/9/2008 10:11:02 PM)

 

ok so i lied....sorry but everytime i tried to log on or get on the forum it said "this service is unavalible...i don't think that's how u spell it..anyways!! i'm gonna do my best to finish chapter 9 tonight soo u hav 2 updates and u should get an update nxt next sunday or monday (i'm going to camp) then i go to a Jonas Brothers concert......YEAAA soo i might b happy enough to update that night i go! Also i skipped a couple of weeks so basically what happend was she went back to nick and said she was just nervous and they r going out on their first offcial date (she went out with her nick brothers so her mom and dad thought it was friendly)...but her parents don't kno.....so ya...and i don't kno...do u guys think it's too mushy..if it is just comment!!

 

Chapter 8

 

Another fun date

 

 

 

  It was finally Friday which means no school, Dad would be at work all day, and I had a date with Nick. I didn't know where he was taking me, I begged six million times to tell me but he's (and I for that matter) very secretive…..when it comes to going out. But I was very excited my Mom have a meeting tonight, Dad was busy with is "work" so that would mean I would have the whole house to myself while I was getting ready. I had this old dress I got a couple of years ago, that I never wore, so it would have to work. As soon as the school bell rang at the end of the day I ran out the front doors and straight to the bike rack. But to my surprise, my bike wasn't there. I felt like crying, because after what I did to Nick, telling him that I didn't want to go out, I just couldn't do that again, at least not now, I mean this was the first official "date". All the other times Joe and Kevin always went because they were always looking out for their little brother, which I thought was really sweet. But enough of the daydreaming, how was I going to get home now? I couldn't run, it was too far. So I decided to ask one of my friends Mom to drop me off at home. Luckily my best friends Mom was more than happy to do it. I got home about 4:30, which didn't give me a lot of time to get ready since Nick was picking me up around 6:30. I mean is 2 hours a lot of time for average girl to get ready for what might be the greatest night of my life?

 

 

 

6:30 pm Natalie's house

 

"Wow! You look great." Thanks you look pretty great yourself." I couldn't believe that I was going on a date with Nick Jonas, the thing that other girls can only dream of. "Where are we going?" "You'll see we're almost there." "Okay." Then I saw the most amazing thing I will ever see in my whole entire life. Nick Jonas had done the nicest and sweetest thing in the world, to one girl. And that girl was me. At the park, Nick had set up a picnic. But it really wasn't an ordinary picnic. He had set up a take with candles, a red blanket, china plates, and it had to be about fifty million flowers every where. And at the front of the door path looking thing, was Big Rob in a tux. I was going to cry. But I held it back as best I could. But it didn't work. "Great I made you cry again maybe I should just forget about girls." I couldn't speak. I sat down beside him and hugged him. Then I whispered in his ear. "Nick I was only crying because it was so amazing." Then he whispered back. "Good, because I really like you.'


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New Post 8/10/2008 1:22 AM
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Chapter 9!! 
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Chapter 9

Lying and Crying and Hurting; Oh My

 

I woke up the next day feeling ever so happy. As I looked outside I saw blue bird sing and….oh god I sound like Cinderella! No that didn’t happen, though I wish it did. Actually I came home a bit late from my date with Nick; which was a BIG mistake. My dad, his drunken usual self, asked where I had been. I of course had to lie; “oh well you see dad I…was…working on a project with Grace”. Whose Grace, he said and I said “oh my bff I’ve had since kindergarten.” This is actually not a lie; she has been my bff since kindergarten, but my dad didn’t really care.

            And guess what my precious little father dearest did? Yep, you guessed it I got beat. This beating was probably the worst beating I’ve ever had. No, no I take that back it WAS the worst beating I’ve ever had. It was so bad that my little Rite Aid make- up couldn’t cover all of it up. And guess who came knocking on my front door? No not Nick but Frankie; asking if I wanted to play. In the past week I had become quite close to him. Playing with him when Nick was busy with band things.

            “Sure” I replied back. Walking outside to the Jonas’s back yard I didn’t realize how hot and humid it was till now. Wearing my heart covered long sleeve shirt. After about and hour of playing I was sweating like I was in the Sahara desert and I was wearing a snow suit. Ok, ok I wasn’t sweating that bad; but I gotta admit it was HOT!

“Nat, Frankie said, why are you wearing a long-sleeved shirt and its 95 degrees outside?”

“Um, well you see frank I’m cold”. “But it’s 95 degrees outside and I don’t think that’s cold”. “Well I do soletsgoinsideandgetsomelemonade” I said very quickly.

            “Ok” he replied. It’s a good thing he was only seven and would basically fall for anything. We went inside and I opened up the fridge to get the pitcher of lemonade. We sat and drank our lemonade in quiet only to talk if Frankie asked a random question. As I was cleaning the glasses and putting them in the cupboard Nick, Joe, Kevin, and Mr. Jonas came in. Mr. Jonas went up stairs and said he had some business call to make. Leaving me and the Jonas boys alone.” Well look who came for a visit; oh but wait you just wanna see Nick don’t you” joked Joe thinking the joke he made was sooo funny! “Ha-ha, I just came to play with Frank the tank here I said gently ruffling his hair. “So you really didn’t wanna see me” Nick fake cried poking his lip out. “Well, I simply stated walking towards Nick putting my right hand on his cheek, yeah sorry, but it’s not working out…I gotta go my own way”. Slowly inching forward to Nick’s face, I was interrupted by a certain Kevin Jonas.

“Oh goodness Natalie, if your gonna cite songs do a Camp Rock one at least said Kevin breaking the moment me and Nick’s lips were about to collide. “Well if your gonna be that way me and Nick will be outside”. We went outside and sat on the patio. Nick soon noticed my long sleeves and questioned my wardrobe. “I sometimes get chills, and this is how I get rid of them.” Oh that was a stupid lie! “Natalie, tell me the truth I know you’re lying. I may not have known you that long but I can read straight through your lies!

           

ps . my friend might update 4 me if not i'll just update when i get back!!

talk to ya'll after camp!


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