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New Post 7/30/2008 12:01 AM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Okay..wrote this out eariler..but something happened to the internet right when i finished it..and yeah..then it was gone..so now i have to type it up ..again.

Chapter 8

*Rachel's POV*

Kevin and i walked down stairs hand-n-hand. He locked fingers with me and smile. We both sat on the couch then Joe sat down on the other side of me. He kept playing with my hand and i pulled my hand away and put it in my lap and scooted closer to Kevin. I laid my head on his shoulder and he smiled at me.

"Kevin..is my phone in your room?" I asked. Kevin was about to say something when Frankie called his name from the basement. Kevin stood up, "Be right back." I stood up and walked up stairs as Kevin walked down to the basement where Frankie called him.

I got in his room nad started my search. "Rachel, Is this your phone?" Joe call from his room. I quickly jogged over and walked into Joe bedroom. "Joe?" I asked looking around. He door closed and he walked out from behind the door. He heald out my phone. "Thanks." I siad trying to grab it.

Joe then put it in his back pocket and smiled at me. "Joe...stop it. Can i please have my phone?" I asked nicly. "Come and get it." Joe said with a flirtly smile. I rolled my eyes and started to walk towards the door, then Joe grabbed me by my waist and pulled me in and kissed me. He heald me close and started walking to his bed, then Kevin walked in, "Rachel?" "It's not what you think..." I said looking at Kevin. Kevin's face got serious and we turned and walked out. I pushed Joe away from me and chansed after Kevin.

"Kevin..Kevin..i'm sorry. It's not what you think. Stop and listen please." I said as i chased him down the stairs. "Nothing and i mean nothing will ever happen between us." Kevin said looking at me with anger. He quickly turned back around and walked to the door with his keys in one hand.

I chased him outside, "Kevin..please. Just listen to me. It's not what you think. Trust me, please." I begged with tears in my eyes. "Go back to alabama!" Kevin yelled walking to his car. Hearing though words made the tears fall down my face. "You didn't mean that." I said grabbing his arm. He quickly turned and looked at me, "I can't play these games, Rachel. I can't walk in and see you kissing my younger brother. I can't do it. and i think i stopped caring." Kevin said in an angry tone.

"Say it to my face if you stopped caring! I know you didn't. You're just mad! If you truly stopped caring, say now..to my face and let it hurt me." I said crying. Kevin stopped and shook his head. "You can't say you stopped caring, Because i know you haven't. You still care about me and i still care about you." I said. "If you still care then why were you kissing Joe?" Kevin asked. "He kissed me!" I yelled out. "You kissed him back." Kevin said. Kevin looked at me and shook his head, "I need some time, away..away from you and this...what ever we have going on."

More tears fell from my eyes and Kevin walked to his car and drove away.

Joe came running out and looked at me, "You don't need him. You have me." "I don't want you! I don't need you! Get it through your head! I don't like you! I like Kevin!" I Yelled at him.

Joe ran up to me and looked at me in the eyes. Tears were falling hard and fast down my face now. Joe kissed me again and i quickly pulled away from him and smacked his face, "Stop it. You've hurt Kevin enough. You made him leave. And now thanks to you. He will never talk to me again." I said walking away.

I ran to my house and slammed the door behind me and sunk down to the floor. I pulled my knees to my chest and cryied. I couldn't believe this was happening.

OKAY! I finally got it writen out..again..comment comment!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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New Post 7/30/2008 12:25 AM
User is offline Carls[I can't breath without you, but I have too}
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

 Go find someone eles girlfriend to steal Joe! Gosh!

Poor Rachel. Poor Kevin.

Post more soon!


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New Post 7/30/2008 12:28 AM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 
Modified By anonymous  on 7/29/2008 10:29:03 PM)

Boys are jerks and they don't know what no means! Joe move on and get over it! Poor Kevin! Poor Rachel!

~Cheyenne~

 
New Post 7/30/2008 12:32 AM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

okay so right now..there is Jealousy, Love(mostly Carissa and Nick right now), anger, envy, Jealousy, pain...alot is going on..but trust me....it's about to get pretty good for Rachel and Kevin.

I might post one more chapter late tonight...like in 30 minutes maybe...:)

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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Does age really matter : - (Completed)
Remember Me: - (Joint fic)
Can't Have You: - (New Thread)
 
New Post 7/30/2008 12:42 AM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

 Rachel wrote

okay so right now..there is Jealousy, Love(mostly Carissa and Nick right now), anger, envy, Jealousy, pain...alot is going on..but trust me....it's about to get pretty good for Rachel and Kevin.

I might post one more chapter late tonight...like in 30 minutes maybe...:)

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)

Ohhhhhhh!!!!!!! About to get good for them! I hope so!

ME=NICK=LOVE! Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!('Aw that's so cute' screams and happy screams)

Post more soon! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(random screaming)


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New Post 7/30/2008 12:53 AM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Chapter 9

*Rachel's POV*

After crying for about 30 minutes, i walked up to my room and changed into some pj's. I was now wairing a gray tank top and blue,white, and black basketball shorts.

I put in one of my CD's and changed it to number two. Hero by Enriqe Iglesias.

(let me be your hero)
Would you dance if i asked you to dance?
Would you run and never look back?
Would you cry if you saw me crying?
Would you save my soul tonight?

Would you tremble, if i touched your lip?
Would you laugh? Oh please tell me this.
Now would you die for the one you love?
Hold me in your arms tonight.

I can be your hero baby
I can kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever
You can take my breath away

Would you sware, that you'll always be mine
Would you lie? Would you run and hide?
I'm i in to deap? Have i lost my mind?
I don't care. Your here tonight

I can be your hero baby
I can kiss away the pain
I will stand by your forever
You can take my breath away

I fell asleep listening to the rest of the song. I was awaken by a voice outside. "Rachel..." Someone whispered out side my window. I looked out and saw Kevin standing there with a dozen roses, "You were right. I never did stop caring. I'll always care for you." I smiled and blew him a kiss.

I ran down stairs and met Kevin at my side window. I hugged his and he wrapped his arms around me and heald me. "I'm sorry..." I said softly. He kissed my forhead and everything felt okay again. Everything was perfect.

We started to dance in the moon light and he kissed my lip softly.

OKAY! There's the chapter! :D hope u like it..here's the song if u guy wanna listen to it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7avMqzo9Iow sad music video :(...COMMENTS COMMENTS!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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My Fanfics:
We were once inseperable: - (Completed)
Does age really matter : - (Completed)
Remember Me: - (Joint fic)
Can't Have You: - (New Thread)
 
New Post 7/30/2008 1:04 AM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Awwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was the cutest thing...*tears up* I wish Kevin Jonas would do that for me (or any of the Jonas Brothers!)

Post more soon!(I can't listen to the song cause my internet suck, but I think I've heard it before.)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(random screaming)


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New Post 7/30/2008 1:13 AM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Cute! Post More Soon! I have the song on my iPod and I'm listening to it right now.

~Cheyenne~

 
New Post 7/30/2008 12:56 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Yeah i was listening to the song and i was like oh..this would fit really well in the fanfic! :D

Chapter 10

*Rachel's POV*

After Kevin and i had our momment under the stars, he kissed me one more time. Then took me to his house. We thought about watching a movie, but when we walked in we saw Nick and Carissa both asleep on the couch. Nick had his arm around her and she was leaning over on him with her head on his chest. "How cute..." I whispered. Kevin grabbed my hand and pulled me upstairs.

We tried to be really quiet hoping not to wake anyone up. We quickly walked past Joe's room and into Kevin's room. Then Kevin closed the door when i walked in. We both went and sat on the bed. He was playing with some of my hair. He put his arm around me and pulled me closer to him. I had on hand on his stomach and the other one around his back. Then we both feel asleep.

*Joe's POV*

I was still kinda awake. I was sitting in my bed and dosing off to sleep. I had to go to the bathroom so i stood up and saw to figures walk past my room. They were holding hands. I quickly ran to the door just in time to see Kevin's door close. I quickly ran up to his door and listened. It was really quiet.

I ran to the bathroom and when i was done i walked back over to Kevin's room. Kevin was a heavy sleep so i opened the door and walked in. I saw Rachel asleep on Kevin's chest and he had his arm around her. I walked over and shook my head. She had her head turned up so i leaned down and kissed her lips softly. I turned around and walked out.

I laid down in my bed and started to think. I had to think of something to get her to come to me. I then had a plan.

*Nick's POV*

Carissa and i were both asleep till i heard her phone ring. I quickly picked it up not wanting to wake her. "Hello?" I whispered.

"uh..is Carissa there?" The stanger asked over the phone. Carissa then looked up at me and smiled. I handed her the phone and she started to talk to them. "It's no that late...WHAT?...ok ok i'm sorry. bye" Carissa said.

She looked at me and weakly smiled. "What is it?" I asked. "I have to go home. It's late and my parents got worried." She said standing up. I stood up and waked her to my door. "Do you want me to walk you home?" I asked. "No...you don't have too" She said. I grabbed her hand and we both walked out the door. When we got to her door step she looked at my and smiled. "Thanks..." She said. I hugged her and then i looked down at her. I started to lean down to kiss her and she started to come up. Our lips almost touched when her door opened and her mom stood there.

She smiled at me and hugged me one more time then walked inside. I was so close. I thought to myself.

I ran back over to my house, ran upstairs, changed clothes then went to bed. I couldn't wait for us to go out on our date tomorrow.

OKAY! There's a chapter! I hope u guys like it! :D

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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Does age really matter : - (Completed)
Remember Me: - (Joint fic)
Can't Have You: - (New Thread)
 
New Post 7/30/2008 1:25 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Joe will never learn! lol. Post More Soon!

~Cheyenne~

 
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