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New Post 4/13/2008 8:21 PM
User is offline N i N A J O N A S™
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The Smile on Your Face 
Modified By N i N A J O N A S™  on 4/13/2008 6:23:23 PM)

I was so disappointed with this that I changed it various times, and I came to the conclusion that I no longer like this plot. But I got your hopes up, so I'm going to post it, but trust me it's horrible and not my best work!
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The Smile on Your Face
one-shot
            I would noticed him anywhere. His pearly white teeth made it possible for that to happen every time he smiled; that seemed to be what he does on a daily basis. Me? I'd look in front of the mirror and smile and criticize my reflection as I recognize my gap. My best friend, Selena, would tell me that it made me different, unique, and different from everyone else. However, that's not how I felt. I felt as if I needed it gone; closed and in the past.

 

          For the first time ever, I was standing in the same room as him. The guy who lights up the room when he smiles. If only I had a smile like that. His teeth are so perfect! He smiled at me from across the room, so I returned the gesture, only to realize his smile fading. I sighed and turned away. I knew it; he didn't feel the same way as Selena did about my gap. He hated it, and now he hates me.


          As I started to walk away, I felt a hand on my shoulder. "Usually when I flash a flirty smile, people wait to see what I had on my mind." He whispered. His hot breath on my neck made me wince, and I slowly turned around. There he was. "I've heard about you, you're Demi Lovato." He smiled. God, I could've melted like a Popsicle in the sunlight.
         
          "Yeah, well I've heard about you! You're Joe Jonas."

          "That I am."

                                               
                             *                           *                                     *

          Since then, Joe and I've been inseparable. His tour had made that hard; but it was never impossible. I've met him over three months ago, and I've fallen harder and faster than I've ever fell before. But everyday, in magazines and through my eyes, I see him with her. Her name is
Brittany. The girl who's holding his heart. It was obvious she didn't like me. She even told Joe he spends too much time with me, but he never stopped, and that I adore. I remember the day he told me she was intimidated by me, and that she should be. That made my pale face turn a bright red. He always have that effect on me.
         
          Suddenly, my cell phone rang, causing me to jump as the vibrating object shook my leg. I pulled it out and flipped it open. "Joseph." I was now smiling as I heard him breathing on the other line.

          "I just broke up with Britt." He sighed. My grin grew wider. "And for some odd reason, I feel good about it."

          "What?" I asked. "You were crazy about her. What happened?!"
         
          "I don't know, she just wasn't the same...I'm in town though, come see me?"
         
          "Uh sure-"
         
          "Meet me at the park." He hung up and I immediately jumped out of my chair and slipped my feet into my flats. I jogged down the street until I reached the park. Joe was sitting atop the monkey bars with his feet hanging down and his hands jammed in his pockets. I skipped over towards him and climbed, sitting beside him. He smiled at me. He stared at me, as if he was waiting for something. I raised an eyebrow and he just kept staring.

          "I'm waiting for you to make my day." He said simply. I still didn't know what he meant, and it showed on my face. "Smile." I smiled bigger than ever before, and it wasn't because he told me to.

          "You're the first person who actually admitted that they like my smile. I wanted to get my gap closed." I mumbled. He gasped.
         
          "I'll pretend I didn't hear that. And I don't like you're smile, I fell for it. I fell-I fell so fast. Not just for your smile, but for you." He admitted, turning his face towards the ground. My eyes widened, and my heart skipped a beat. "What do you say about that?" He asked.

          "I-I say you just got out of a relationship and I'll pretend that it never spilled out of your mouth." He sighed. "Who am I kidding? What I really wanna say is, I fell for you too." His eyes were smiling now, sparkling in the sunlight like never before. "What do you say about that?"

          "I say don't object when I do this." He crashed our lips together. Everything around me seemed to have disappeared, and that was just the beginning.

 

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          We became the next, best celebrity couple. We were practically in every magazine, and that just made my fame increase.

Three years later...

 

          We were still together. People didn't believe it, people were surprised, but I found love. The promise ring on my finger made me realize that his love for me was real, and it was never going to leave.

The following year...

          I was on tour with them, but not as a singer. My career had went down hill, and Joe was there to comfort me every step of the way. A month after that, he made a public proposal. The crowd reacted different, they were excited. I didn’t expect that to happen. I was so glad I found love. So glad actually something in my life fell into place. So glad that about four years ago, I ran out on the party, because if I hadn’t he would’ve never chased me; and this would’ve never happened.

 
New Post 4/13/2008 8:26 PM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 

WOW.

That poned, seriously! :) :)

YOU ROCK AT WRITING.




 
New Post 4/13/2008 8:29 PM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 

thanks!

hey, how do you get a link in your siggy spot, thingy.

 
New Post 4/13/2008 9:35 PM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 

Wow, that was really well written!!

Great job!

And I like it a lot.

 
New Post 4/13/2008 9:39 PM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 

You just put

<a href=URL OF YOUR FANFIC>TEXT HERE</a>




 
New Post 4/13/2008 9:46 PM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 
umm this is not horrible in the least. As kevin would say, it's SICK! And if this is what you think your bad writing is, I can't wait till you get around to some stuff you think is good! :]
 
New Post 4/13/2008 10:32 PM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 

Oh my lanta. That was amazing! 
Seriously I give you mad props for your writing skills.



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New Post 4/27/2008 10:34 PM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 

wow! u thought that was bad?! what's good!?...girl that was amazing! i loved it! i know that's not all u have! u better cough it up and get to writin'!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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New Post 4/28/2008 12:31 AM
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Re: The Smile on Your Face 

wow that was awesome!


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