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New Post 6/8/2008 7:44 PM
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You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

This is an small intro.

Intro

 I sat on the rusty porch as I pushed a thin strand of my brown hair out of my face.  The sun warmed the tears as they ran down my pale face.  It was a hot summer day, the wind blew as I waved goodbye.  I had wasted my last chance of anything by making the mistake of my Life.  I knew it was over from the very first second.  I gazed into the sky, and relized that I had made another mistake.  This one not as bad but more intence then the first.  My heart was broken forever on, and I would never let in get broken again.

That's all, not much, but please coment.

 


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New Post 6/8/2008 8:10 PM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

Cool! I can't wait for chapters! PMS!


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New Post 6/8/2008 8:34 PM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

OMJ! You rock . This is a great ff. Keep posting.

P.S: It's all Brandys falt! ( inside joke)


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New Post 6/9/2008 11:24 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

AWESOME intro! :)....Post a chapter soon!!!!!! :)

 can't wait 4 an update! PMS!

<3Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas<3)


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New Post 6/11/2008 12:39 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

 Music is my love wrote

OMJ! You rock . This is a great ff. Keep posting.

P.S: It's all Brandys falt! ( inside joke)

LOL!  Brandy;s fault!!!!!!!!

I'll post more in the next 2-3 days, idk, If you're not on here!


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New Post 6/13/2008 1:06 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

Chapter One

Nick was gone, gone out of my Life forever.  He had left for Tour, and he wouldn't be back for 3 months.  I lived in Texas, yes in Texas.  On the tour they were going on there was only one in Texas, and that was on the 6th day of the tour.  It was going to be hard to be away fomr him for so long, and only see him once.  I was in Love with Nick from the very first time we met.

FLASHBACK

I was at an Guitar store, late evening. 

"This Guitar is to exspensive"  I complained as I sat it back on the stand.  I was looking around when I was a bright, shiny, beautiful Guitar.  It was a Dark Red, and it kind of looked wooden, but wasn't.. I had my Eye on it, and was rushing over to get it.  I was grabbing the neck when another hand touched mine,  I looked up to see Nick Jonas.  Are Eyes locked as he started to grip my hand. A feeling of accpetance, a feeling that I have never felt before I wa feeling.  It was an Amazing feeling.  The feeling I'll never forget  "Hi"  I started to say, but Nick cut me off not knwing it. "Hi, My name is Nick"  I nodded my head as I said, "HI, nice to meet you, my name is Corinna."  He smiled with his crooked teeth that I had addmired ever since I heard the song "Mandy".  "You're Nick, Jonas?"  I asked, not sure what to say. "Yea"  he said, "Are you a fan?"  I excitingly told him, "Yes, big fan". 

Kevin then walked over as me and Nick stared into eachothers Eyes, still holding hands, Nick shaking mine.  Kevin stood there for a second, then Joe walked up.  Kevin nudgged Joe's arm, and pionted to me and Nick.  "Hey!"  Joe ruined the moment.  Both me and Nick's heads popped up, "What?"  we both said at the same time.  "Nothing, I just said hey"  Joe informed us.  "Oh"  Nick said, "Meet Corinna"  Joe nodded his head as he smiled.  He shook my hand hard for a while.  Then Kevin came up to me, "Hey, I'm Kevin, and that was Joe"  he told me.  As we shook hands he started to lean toward my face, he whispered in my ear, "Nice outfit"  I was wearing a Black, and White checkered Guitar shirt with a Black vest over it, in Red jeans, and VANS Shoe's. (Yes, I'm a Skater kind of girl!  With a Jonas Rock and Surfer Twist! Just thought I'd throw that in!)  I thanked Kevin, "Thank you, that means so much to me!"  He smiled as he walked over to Joe.  Nick then told me, "So, you going to get this Guitar?" I didn't want to take it of he loved it, "Oh, no, if you want it."  Nick walked up to me, and said, "It's ok, you can have it."  I lifted up the price tag, "Oh"  I grouned, "I can't have it."  Kevin looked at the price, "To expensive"  I nodded my head, "Yea"  Nick took out his blue wallet, and took out some money, "How much?" he asked, was he thinking about buyiing this for me or himslef?  "Uh.......1,000, That's alot for me........."  Nick counted his money, "I'll pay"  he told me, "What?"  I asked, trying to believe what exactly was happening.   "Yea"  Nick told me as he picked up the Guitar, and brought it to the register.  He bought it.  His brothers were very suprised.  "You just spent all your money on a girl you thought was cute."  I heard Joe tell him, "Even if I agree" Nick laughed as he looked back at me, he winked. 

That was the day I met him, the Best Day of my Life so far.  Beofre we all left the store, me and Nick talked.  We exchanged phone numbers, e-mail, and Myspaces. (as in his music myspace)  I was happy.

FLASHBACK OVER

Now I was sitting here on my front porch, waving goodbye to the one I Love without telling him how I felt.  He once felt the same way, until the first mistake of my Life, but we'll get to that later.

Nick's Eyes filled with water as he got in the car. Kevin, Joe, and Nick had already hugged me, but then Joe ran back, and told me, "Miss you babe" he hugged me tightly as Kevin came behind him, "Keep touch with all of us, ok?"  Kevin said to me as he hugged me.  Kevin was always confurting.  Last was Nick, teary eyed he told me, "I'm going to miss you so much, call me all the time."  I was still crying as Nick sat down for a while, and hugged me tight, I wanted this moment to last forever.

"I.........I"  Nick couldn't seem to get the words out, he was in Love with Corinna since the first time they touched.  He wanted to tell her that he Loved her, and he never wanted to let go, he wanted to be with her forever, but he had already blown his chance with her.  The biggest mistake of his life, and this one was the second.

"I'll call you all the time" he told me.

"Oh no"

Nick thought, I didn't tell her.

Joe, and Kevin were in the car waiting for about one minute of Nick, and me hugging, "Everything's going to be alright."  Nick told me as he held me in his arms.

"Bye:

he said as he left my steps, and though It wasn't it seemed like he was out of my Life.

That's all for this Chapter!

Sorry it's short!

Comment!

 
New Post 6/15/2008 4:29 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

 anonymous wrote

Chapter One

Nick was gone, gone out of my Life forever.  He had left for Tour, and he wouldn't be back for 3 months.  I lived in Texas, yes in Texas.  On the tour they were going on there was only one in Texas, and that was on the 6th day of the tour.  It was going to be hard to be away fomr him for so long, and only see him once.  I was in Love with Nick from the very first time we met.

FLASHBACK

I was at an Guitar store, late evening. 

"This Guitar is to exspensive"  I complained as I sat it back on the stand.  I was looking around when I was a bright, shiny, beautiful Guitar.  It was a Dark Red, and it kind of looked wooden, but wasn't.. I had my Eye on it, and was rushing over to get it.  I was grabbing the neck when another hand touched mine,  I looked up to see Nick Jonas.  Are Eyes locked as he started to grip my hand. A feeling of accpetance, a feeling that I have never felt before I wa feeling.  It was an Amazing feeling.  The feeling I'll never forget  "Hi"  I started to say, but Nick cut me off not knwing it. "Hi, My name is Nick"  I nodded my head as I said, "HI, nice to meet you, my name is Corinna."  He smiled with his crooked teeth that I had addmired ever since I heard the song "Mandy".  "You're Nick, Jonas?"  I asked, not sure what to say. "Yea"  he said, "Are you a fan?"  I excitingly told him, "Yes, big fan". 

Kevin then walked over as me and Nick stared into eachothers Eyes, still holding hands, Nick shaking mine.  Kevin stood there for a second, then Joe walked up.  Kevin nudgged Joe's arm, and pionted to me and Nick.  "Hey!"  Joe ruined the moment.  Both me and Nick's heads popped up, "What?"  we both said at the same time.  "Nothing, I just said hey"  Joe informed us.  "Oh"  Nick said, "Meet Corinna"  Joe nodded his head as he smiled.  He shook my hand hard for a while.  Then Kevin came up to me, "Hey, I'm Kevin, and that was Joe"  he told me.  As we shook hands he started to lean toward my face, he whispered in my ear, "Nice outfit"  I was wearing a Black, and White checkered Guitar shirt with a Black vest over it, in Red jeans, and VANS Shoe's. (Yes, I'm a Skater kind of girl!  With a Jonas Rock and Surfer Twist! Just thought I'd throw that in!)  I thanked Kevin, "Thank you, that means so much to me!"  He smiled as he walked over to Joe.  Nick then told me, "So, you going to get this Guitar?" I didn't want to take it of he loved it, "Oh, no, if you want it."  Nick walked up to me, and said, "It's ok, you can have it."  I lifted up the price tag, "Oh"  I grouned, "I can't have it."  Kevin looked at the price, "To expensive"  I nodded my head, "Yea"  Nick took out his blue wallet, and took out some money, "How much?" he asked, was he thinking about buyiing this for me or himslef?  "Uh.......1,000, That's alot for me........."  Nick counted his money, "I'll pay"  he told me, "What?"  I asked, trying to believe what exactly was happening.   "Yea"  Nick told me as he picked up the Guitar, and brought it to the register.  He bought it.  His brothers were very suprised.  "You just spent all your money on a girl you thought was cute."  I heard Joe tell him, "Even if I agree" Nick laughed as he looked back at me, he winked. 

That was the day I met him, the Best Day of my Life so far.  Beofre we all left the store, me and Nick talked.  We exchanged phone numbers, e-mail, and Myspaces. (as in his music myspace)  I was happy.

FLASHBACK OVER

Now I was sitting here on my front porch, waving goodbye to the one I Love without telling him how I felt.  He once felt the same way, until the first mistake of my Life, but we'll get to that later.

Nick's Eyes filled with water as he got in the car. Kevin, Joe, and Nick had already hugged me, but then Joe ran back, and told me, "Miss you babe" he hugged me tightly as Kevin came behind him, "Keep touch with all of us, ok?"  Kevin said to me as he hugged me.  Kevin was always confurting.  Last was Nick, teary eyed he told me, "I'm going to miss you so much, call me all the time."  I was still crying as Nick sat down for a while, and hugged me tight, I wanted this moment to last forever.

"I.........I"  Nick couldn't seem to get the words out, he was in Love with Corinna since the first time they touched.  He wanted to tell her that he Loved her, and he never wanted to let go, he wanted to be with her forever, but he had already blown his chance with her.  The biggest mistake of his life, and this one was the second.

"I'll call you all the time" he told me.

"Oh no"

Nick thought, I didn't tell her.

Joe, and Kevin were in the car waiting for about one minute of Nick, and me hugging, "Everything's going to be alright."  Nick told me as he held me in his arms.

"Bye:

he said as he left my steps, and though It wasn't it seemed like he was out of my Life.

That's all for this Chapter!

Sorry it's short!

Comment!

Sorry!  I POSTED THIS!

COMENT, READ, ENJOY!

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New Post 6/15/2008 5:03 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

aw this is good! more soon k?


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New Post 6/18/2008 10:45 PM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

Awesome! PMS!!!!

 

 
New Post 6/19/2008 12:57 PM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHH! AH! AH!...i LOVED IT! THATW AS AWESOME!...with the whole FLASH BACK!...that was awesome! and Nick is such a sweet guy....what happened?!?! ok...i'm jumping ahead...

PMS! PLEASE PLEASE PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE! :)

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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