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New Post 6/26/2008 7:50 PM
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New Post 6/27/2008 5:46 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 
Modified By Everything I Ever Wanted:Jonas and Joey Page  on 6/27/2008 3:48:37 AM)

Chapter Two

The car drove off, away.

I took a deep breath.

In, and out.

I tried to make myself feel better instead of being pitiful.

"It's ok Corinna (yes, I talk to myslef) You'll see him, again, you will, everything will be alright.

At least I hoped.

I walked up the steps to my other life, what I called reality.

I plopped myself down on the empty coach.

"Ugh" I groaned

My Mother walked in,

"Hi honey!" ,I sighed at I said, "Hi, mom".  She sat down beside m as she put her arm on my shoulder.  "What's wrong?"  I rubbed my eyelid for a second. "You know Mother."  She had a look witch seemed evil at this moment on her face.  "I do?"  she asked, as If she didn't know,  "Mom"  I told her, "Oh"  she acted as if she just figured it out, "Those Jonas Boys left, didn't they?"

My Mom, for some bisar reason didn't like The Jonas Brothers, though they are the guy's every Mother wanted their daughter to date, she had a different look, outview shall I call it.

I knew the reason though, almost to the exact.

My Mom didn't want my heart to be broken.  She didn't want me to suffer when I fell in Love with one of them.  Ofcourse I did.  Nick.  My Mom was right, he did break my heart, but we were great Friends now, even though she could never experiance the feeling I had of how much I wanted to be more with Nick, so much more. 

Another reason is because, my Mom did have he use-to-be-fragle-heart broken, by who?  My Dad, they devorsed about one yeear ago after years of being together.  It was my Dad's dection.

Though she knew for a fact not one of The Jonas Brothers would do anything like that to me or anyone else.  She still treated me like a kid, a stupid one.  At first she was all happy for me when Nick asked me out, and when I met them.  She'd say, "You and Nick would make such a cute couple!  Actually, any of them and you!"  We'd laugh about Guy's, everything, and anything. She was the coolest Mom ever.  She let me start my own Band, and everything. Then it all disappeared, One sad, year ago.  It didn't fade, it died instintly.  Sad, but the truth.

Love Hurts

I thought as I begain to respond to what my Mom said to me,

"Yes, yes Mother.........."

She didn't get it, she never would or it seemed, no she never would :)

"Oh, what's wrong then?"

I wanted to slap her so hard, Oh my Jonas, I did.  I had held this in for so long, it was time for me to let it out.

I exploded this time.

"Don't you get it!  I know you do!  You just act like you don't!  I know why you do, I also know you'll never admit it!"

Her face looked shocked.

"What?  Don't you speak to me in that tone!"

I stood up quickly,

"Yes, you know, and I'll speak to you on this tone if I want to, ok!  The Jonas Brothers are such, great, amazing gy's, and you can't execpt that!  You think my heart will get broken!  Well, guess what, it has, and I'm not afriad to admit it, you wont admit what Dad did to you!  You just act like it was nothing!  So, you wont let me go out with one sinlge guy, you use to be fine with it!"

My Mom also stood up, but slowly,

"You don't talk to me that way yougn lady!  I let you go out with boy's!"

Tears filled my now, red, puffy eyes,

"I can!  I know you do, but you hate it, you hide it, then act rood, and make me feel so guilty!  Do you know hwo that feels?  I guess you don't!  Do you?"

I rushed into my room crying.

I lyed on my bed as I held the stuffed bear Nick had given me before the mistake.

I rubbed it's furt as I looked out the window, thinking of how Nick was doing.

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NICK

I sat in the Jeep with my Fellow Brothers.

I felt so bad about my mistake.  I was Mr. Positive, Mr. Perfct to some, and Mr. President to others, but at this moment, I felt like I was the least qualified for all of them.  Joe was watching icarly while Kevin was listening to his iopd.  I was sitting, thinking.  Maybe I wouldn't think about Corinna through this whole tour.  I knew I couldn't forget about her, but I didn't want to be thinking about he constintly or did I?

I gazed out the fogged window, and thought of what Corinna was thinking about.

_______________________________________________________________________

CORINNA

I took out my Blue ipod, and listened to, "One Day At A Time"  It felt like the perfect song for this moment, for these long days to come on the tour.

_______________________________________________________________________

NICK

 

 

I took out my Blue ipod, and listened to, "One Day At A Time"  It felt like the perfect song for this moment, for these long days to come on the tour.

THAT'S ALL OF THIS CHAPTER!

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New Post 6/27/2008 11:33 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 
aw thats so cute!!!
they listened to the same song xD
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New Post 6/27/2008 12:02 PM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

So cute. They are listening to the same song!(love that song. The Underdog always wins!)

Wow you like kind put our Mom in the story. I mean seriously that is so what she would do.


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New Post 7/17/2008 2:57 AM
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Re: You said you were my shining star, but you were really only a shadow(A Nick fic) 

Chapter Three

NICK

As the song went on, I fell asleep.

I had a dream, a dream of the past.  This dream was true, it actually happened.

FLASHBACK (While dreaming)

I sat beside Corinna as we held hands.  I then let go of the grip of her palm.  "Um......Corinna"  She looked up as she smiled, "What?"  I hesitated.  "I have to tell you something......"  She nodded her head, understanding.  "I, I can't be with you anymore."  He got it out.  "What?  You're breaking up with me?"  She asked, confused.  "Yes"  Nick told her as Nick got up.  Corinna just sat there as Nick ran away.

Nick knew Corinna would be crying, he was himslef.  He didn't understand himself.  He Loved Corinna, just too much.  He never felt the same way about anyone, I mean, with Corinna it felt so right, but at times to wrong, one his Brother had told him that, that was Love, True Love, and Nick wasn't ready for that.  He hated breaking her heart, but, Nick was hurting on the inside, and soon, he would even more.

Full of regret, he went home with a frown.

He woke up to Kevin shaking him.

"Get up!   Hurry!"  Nick rubbed him eye, "What?"  Kevin yelled, "Corinna!"  Nick jumped up, "What about?"  Did his brothers know about the break up?  Kevin told Nick, "She's-"

END FLASHBACK/DREAM

Nick's head popped up as Joe shook him.  "Finally, you're up"  Joe said.  Nick was thankful his dream had ended, before.............it, happned.  The mistake was him braking up with Corinna, but something resulted that was worst, and he didn't want to feel the pain again.  Never again.

CORINNA

I fell asleep As I began to dream.

FLASHBACK (While dreaming)

Nick was Amazing.

I sat next to him as he let go of my hand.  "Um......Corinna" Nick said, I smiled at him as I asked, "What?"  Nick started to get nervouse, I could tell.  "I need to tell you something.........."  I nodded my head, waiting for him to tell me.  "I,"  He paused, "I can't be with you anymore"  My heart dropped as I brought up the horrible question, "What?  Are you breaking up with me?"  My Heart was lready gone by the time he answered, "Yes"  he said as he turned away, running.

A tear ran down my cheek, followed by another.

I was so crushed.

I just sat there, not knowing what to do.

The Love of my life gone.

It was late night when I decided what I was going to do.

Tonight I would-

END FLASHBACK/DREAM

I woke up as I flet my face, it was wet.  I had been crying, I would of cried more if the following had continuted. The mistake of my Life, Well, the first.

 

 


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New Post 7/18/2008 2:03 PM
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New Post 7/19/2008 12:20 AM
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New Post 7/21/2008 12:42 PM
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New Post 7/21/2008 2:40 PM
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wait..what did she do...what happened?! TELL ME! *shakes screen*...oh snap...anywho!

PM ASAP!

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