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 7/27/2008 6:13 PM
 

Okay...i already have one fanfic it's called We were once Inceparable..and i wanted to write an other one so here it is!

                             Prologe(sp?)

15 year old Rachel(that's me! LOL) Lives in a regular home with regular friends and family. (She's an only child) Her dad wins the lotery(sp?) and they become like i guess...rich. Her parent have always wanted to live in Texas...so they make a move and a BIG change.

They move away from there friends and family to live in Texas. They find a house in a gated neighborhood. It's a cute two story house. While Rachel is going through a hard time with everything that happens...she meets someone that she can turn to, that she can trust, and lean on with things are looking down. She make mistakes and does some stupid things. He...(if any of you can guess who 'He' is)...doesn't know how much of her games he can take. They start driffing apart and they just might loose a friendship and maybe something more. They both relize they need each other, but becasue of there age diffurence he doesn't know how to tell her how much he really care about her. Will they let age get in the way of everything they might and could become? Will she give up on him and he give up on her? Will he ever tell her how much he cares? Find out soon! Just leave me comments! :D

Okay...sounds kind of dramatic..but yeah...tell me what u think..if i should continue..or just give up on it...:D

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)



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 7/27/2008 6:19 PM
 

Aw!

Love it! Post it soon Rachel!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(random screaming!)


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 7/27/2008 6:23 PM
 

Sounds awesome! Post The First Chapter Soon!

~Cheyenne~

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 7/27/2008 6:43 PM
 

Excited much! :D lol

Chapter 1 (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! more random screaming)

I looked out the window of the little green mazda as we pulled into the house we pulled into a neighborhood. We soon pulled into a  white house with tan shuters and stone work in the front. It was cute..but i wish i was at my real home. I stepped out the car with a frown on my face and i looked at the house.

"Don't worry. You'll love it." My dad whispered as he walked up to the house. I looked at the house and shook my head, "I wish i was home." "Honey...are you coming. We're looking at the house soon." My mom said as she looked at me.

"No..i think i'll stay out here." I said looking at them and the house. This wasn't home. I wish they didn't wanna move here. I wished i was anywhere BUT here.

"But you need to look at the house." My dad said calling after me. I looked at him and sighed, He shook his head and him and my mom walked inside. I sat down in the front yard and pulled out my phone.

i was sitting there when i saw a little kid run and grab a base ball bat. i watched as him and some of his friends played around. He looked about 8 and he had wavy brown hair. I turned my attention back to my phone.

"Heads up!" The young boy yelled. I looked up and saw the ball coming down next to me. I stuck out my hand and caught it. I through it back to them and they smiled. I looked back at my phone and started playing music.

"FRANKIE! LUNCH!" Someone yelled from the door. I looked over and saw a dark brown hair guy standing there. He had tight curls and he was kind of cute.

He looked over at me and i quickly looked bakc at my phone. A minute later he walked over.

"Hi there." He said looking down at me. "Hi.." I said softly. "Are you moving here?" He asked. "I don't know..." I said slowly. I stood up and looked at him. He smiled at me and i weakly smiled back.

"I'm Kevin." He said extending out his hand. "Rachel." I said shaking his hand. He had a ferm but warm hand shake. It got really quiet for a minute and i looked down at my feet.

"Where are you from?" Kevin asked. "Alabama." I answered. "That's a big move." He said back to me. "I know...i didn't wanna move." I said sitting back down in the grass.

He sat next to me and watched me. "Do you have somewhere to me? Other than next to me." I asked him. I sounded rude and harsh, but i didn't know him and it's not like i was gonna live here.

Kevin looked at me hurt, "Sorry.." He said softly. He stood up and looked down at me. "If...if you ever...ever wanna met some other neighbors..." He started to say. "I don't need to met them. I'm not gonna live here. I don't wanna live here. I don't belong here!" I said harsh. He stepped back and looked at me.

"Sorry for be friendly." He said walking away. I shook my head and looked back at my phone.

This wasn't my home. I didn't wanna be here and i shouldn't be here. I let out a sigh and a tear fell from my eyes slowly. This wasn't my home.....

OKAY!...there's a chapter! Tell me what u think! COMMENT COMMENT!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)



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 7/27/2008 6:46 PM
 

Sad! Post More Soon!

~Cheyenne~

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 7/27/2008 6:48 PM
 

Aw! Sad first chapter.

Kevin so cute! :) Sorry, but he's so cute!

Post more soon. It was awesome!


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 7/27/2008 7:34 PM
 

Bored...

Yo yo! That's right I said it twice!


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 7/28/2008 12:11 PM
 

 

OMG! Carissa..your so random! lol! I love it!

Chapter 2

*The next day in the hotel*

Rachel's POV

"Are we really moving here?!" I praticly yelled. "Honey, calm down." My dad said. "NO! I can't! Our home is in Alabama! I don't wanna move here." I yelled. I had never talked to my dad like that. His eyes got big and my mom looked at me, "YOUNG LADY! You do not talk to your father like that. And rather you like it or not. We are moving here end of descusion!"

Boy did i hate it when she called me young lady and said end of descusion crap on me. "We're signing the paper today. You can stay here or you can come with us." My dad said. "Can i live a friends house in alabama?" I asked suddenly. "RACHEL!" My mom yelled. My dad's face turned red and he walked out the door with my mom. They went to go sign the papers.

I laid down on the bed and looked up at the ceiling. For some reason, that Kevin guy can to my head. I started to think about him and living next to him. "Why did i have to be such a jerk to him?" I thought out loud.

I stood up and walked to the bathroom. I took a quick shower and through on some new clothes. I was wairing regular lit blue jean pants and a black and white hoodie shirt with a connected pocket in the front. I pulled my hair to the side and let it hang over my sholder. I sat on the bed and looked at the wall. I stood up and changed again. But this time into a wgite t-shirt that said i ♥ NY and some basket ball shorts. I put on my tennis shoes and grabbed my i-pod and quickly put my hair up in a pony tail.

I slipped my phone in my pocket adn started to walk out the door. I grabbed the key and i was gone.

I got down to the first floor taking the stairs and i stepped out side. I turned on my i-pod and started to jog down the streets. I usally took a long jog or run when i was upset about something.

There was like no one in the street so i picked up my speed. I was running not noing where i was going, just running. I stopped in front of a starbucks and walked inside. I odered a strawberrys and cream and sat at a table. Sweat was falling from my face as i whipped it away with my shirt. I heard the bell ding and three young boys walked. One of them was Kevin.

"Great...i just had to pick starbucks." I said softly. I tok a sip of my drink and looked at my i-pod. He was walekd up next to me and started to order.

I quickly stood up and through away the rest of my drink. I started walking to the door, wheni heard my name called out. "Rachel?!" I heard Kevin voice say.

I ran out the door and continued my run.

Kevin's POV

I looked as Rachel ran out the door. "You know her?!" Joe asked looking at me. "Yeah...she's not the friendliest person ever." I said looking where she was sitting. I looked at her set and saw a pink phone there. I walked over and pick it up. I slid it open and saw Rachel and someone else in the picture. It was a young girl about her age. They were hugging each other and laughing.

I smiled at the picture. "I would give anything to see her smile." I said softly.

OKAY! There's the chapter! It kinda cute in the end! The begning is a little rough...but COMMENT COMMENT!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)



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 7/28/2008 3:10 PM
 

Amazing! Post More Soon!

~Cheyenne~

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 7/28/2008 5:06 PM
 

Chapter 3

*Rachel's POV*

I was running, and i finally got back to the hotel. I quickly ran up to my room and unlocked the door. I walked in and my parents were sitting on the bed. They both stood up and looked at me. "Is there a reason you weren't here when we walked in?" My mom asked. I looked at my feet and put my hand behind my back. "And why weren't you picking up your phone when we called?" My dad ask in an angry tone. "My phone never rang." I said. I reached into my pocket. Nothing.

"Where's your phone, young lady?!" My mom asked. I looked up at me parents, "I don't know..it was in my pocket. It must have..." "Quiet! " My dad said. Boy had i done it now. I wanted so badly to go bang my head against the wall.

"Your grounded." My dad said. "WHAT?! For going for a run?! FOR WHAT?! What did i do?!" I yelled out. "First for talking to us like that, for loosing your phone, and for not telling us where you where going." My mom siad. "I was running. Going no where! I understand the phone part. But for running. Next am i gonna get ground for talking?" I asked. "For talking to us like that you might." My dad said. I sigh and shook my head. "Come on...Where going to take our stuff to the house." mom saod walking to me.

"You mean tha box with a roof, that you guys call home?!" I said. "You're pushing it..." Dad said. I quickly turned and walked out the door.

"Hold on...Let me call my phone." I said walking to the hotel phone. "You're grounded, remember. You kinding me. I have to get my phone back!" I said. "Five minutes." My dad said walking out the door with my mom.

I dialed the number hopeing someone found it.

"Hello?!" A guys voice said over the phone. "Uh...i lost me phone..and who is this?!" I asked. "Rachel?!"

"That's funny 'cause you sound like a guy to me." I said smiling. "No..i'm Kevin. Remember..the neighbor. Uh...the person you didn't pay any attention to in starbucks." He said over the phone. "Kevin? You found my phone?" I asked. "Yeah. I saw it in your seet. I'm guess you called to get it back ,right?" Kevin asked. "Uh...yeah. Can you hold onto it for me, untill i can get it back." I asked. "Sure. You know where i live." Kevin said.

"I have to go, and thanks." I said hanging up.

I walked out of the hotel room and down to the car. I hopped in and my dad started to drive. We soon pulled into the neighborhood. Then my dad pulled into the drive way. I stepped out and looked at the house.

Then a man and a woman stepped out of Kevin house.

"Hi there." The woman greeted us with a warm smile. "Hi!" My mom said walking over. The man walked over and started talking to my dad.

"Oh let me get my boys. Kevin! Joe! Nick! Frankie! Come here!" There mom yelled out. Four boy came runngin out of the house and stood next to there mom.

I look up and they all smiled. I looked down at my feet quickly.

"Rachel, honey come here." My mom said. "Boys this is Rachel" My mom said pushing me foward and i almost bummed into Kevin. Kevin smiled and handed me my phone. "Rachel what do you say?" My mom asked. I looked at her with a straight face.

"Mom, i was about to say thank you." I said. My mom looked at me and glared. "Thank you.." I said softly. "Your welcome." Kevin said looking at his feet.

We all stood there in silents. I turned and started to walk away. "Rachel where are you going?" My mom asked. "To the box with a roof." I said pointing to the house. Kevin, Joe and Nick started to laugh. "Boys..." There mom said and they stopped.

My mom walked over to me and grabbed my arm, "You are gonna be nice to these boys and you are gonna started calling this our home." My mom said holding my arm tighter. I pulled away and she grabbed it again. She brought her hand up and quickly slapped my face. I looked at her with tears in my eyes and she let go.

She walked back over to Mrs.Jonas and started talking to her like nothing ever happened. I looked up to see Kevin looking at me with worry in his eyes. A tear feel from my face and i looked down.

Kevin walked over and looked at me. He whipped the tears from my eyes, "All you need is a friend. I can be that if you let me." I looked up at him and smiled.

He wrapped his arms around me and hugged me and i hugged him back. He heald me in his warm strong arms. He was right, i did need a friend and he could be that friend. I needed him.

OKAY! COMMENTS COMMENTS!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)



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