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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Joe don't try to steal your brother's girl cause it doesn't end well! Post More Soon!

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New Post 7/31/2008 3:03 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Chapter 14

*Rachel's POV*

Joe felt the tear fall down my cheek and he pulled away and looked at me, "What's wrong?" "I can't do this Joe." I said crying. "Sh...it's okay." Joe said. He leaned down and started kissing me neck and he made it up to my face. He kissed my lips over and over.
I finally pushed him away, "I'm sorry Joe." I said sitting up some. "Why is it so hard for you to love me?" Joe asked finally. He ran his hands up and down my hips and waist. "Becasue i don't like you like that." I said. "So that kiss ment nothing. I mean nothing to you. You can honestly say you don't like me. Say it to my face. Right here. Right now." Joe said. I looked at himand more tears filled my eyes. "You can't do it. Becuase you do have feelings for me." Joe said touching my arms. He leaned down and kissed me again.
"Stop it. I can't like you! I just can't" I said pushing him away. I pushed him off of me and stood up. I started to walk out the door when Joe grabbed me and pulled me into him. He kissed me passonatly and..i kissed him back knowing it was the stupidest thing i had ever done.

I wrapped my arms around his neck and heald him there. I finally pulled away and started crying. I quickly walked out the door.

*Joe's POV*

i finally got Rachel to admit that she liked me. But she left. I was about to chase after her, but then Kevin pulled up in the drive way.

I quickly closed the door and went up to my room.

I heard Kevin's voice, "Rach! Rachel!" He ran up stairs and looked at me, "Where's Rachel?" "Her house. She wasn't feeling well so she went home."

I didn't really lie to him. I mean she really wasn't feeling good and she did go home. Kevin ran down stairs and i heard the door slam.

*Rachel's POV*

I was sitting in my room crying, when my door opened. Kevin walked in and looked at me, "Babe, what's wrong?" He asked. 
"Nothing. I just don't feel well." I said wipping my eyes. Kevin leaned in and tried to kiss me but i turned my head.
Kevin looked at me, "What's bothering you?" "Nothing! I just don't feel well." I said. "What did Joe do?!" Kevin asked raising his voice. "He did nothing! Can you just leave please?" I asked. "Why?" "Becuase i want to be alone." I said. Kevin looked at me and tried to hug me. I stood up and walked to the door and asked him nicely to leave.

"Can give you a kiss goodbye?" He asked walking over to me. "I shook my head yes and he leaned down and kissed me softly. He walked out the door and i closed it. Tears feel down my face and i cried as i sunk dow to the floor.

*Joe's POV*

I sat in my room and was listening to music. I still had the kiss on my lips and i smiled. Kevin barged in, "What did you do to her? She won't spill and she in her room crying. I can see it in her eyes that she' been hurt! What happened?!" Kevin yelled walking over to me.

"Chill man!" I said standing up. Kevin grabbed my shirt and pulled me to were my face was inches away from him, "If you hurt her, you're gonna wish i was never your brother." I pulled away and Nick walked in. "What the heck is going on?!" He asked. "Kevin was just leaving." I said. Kevin turned around and walked back to his room and slammed the door close.

"What did you do?" Nick asked. "I didn't do anything." "You must have done somthing, Because Rachel is crying, Kevin is mad..and you had something to do with this. What did you do?!" Nick asked conserned. Carissa walked in and i looked at my feet.

She grabbed his hand and they both walked out. I had to go talk to Rachel, and i had to do it now.

OKAY! Looks like there having trouble! COMMENT COMMENT!

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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New Post 7/31/2008 3:35 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

I would slap that boy in the face. No, seriously, just walk up to Joe and go *Bam*, and walk away. Haha Post more soon!


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New Post 7/31/2008 3:43 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 
.... wow rachel, i just read this WHOLE FF right now.

ITS AMAZINGGGGGGG!! sdhjfhjkdsfhjskhj you need to post more soon! i looove it! :D


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New Post 7/31/2008 4:03 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 
Modified By Rachel  on 7/31/2008 2:04:35 PM)

Chapter 15

*Rachel's POV*

I was laying in my bed for a while when i soon feel asleep. I woke up a little later. I had tear stained cheeks. and my pillow had little wet spots on it. I started crying again and feel back to sleep.

*Joe's POV*

I waited a little while before i went over to Rachel's house. I got my shoes on and i walked over there. Her mom let me in and i walked up stairs being as quiet as i could. I walked in her room and saw her sleeping. I walked over and moved the hair from her face. I knelt by her bed and kissed her on the liips softly. I grabbed her hadn and heald it to my chest. I kissed her hand and looked back at her.

I didn't know if i should wake her or if i should just let her sleep. I kissed her one more time and just sat there looking at her beautiful face.

*Kevin's POV*

I was sitting in my room hoping that Rache would call me. I think she had fallen asleep so i didn't bother. I looked out my window and saw Joe walk in her room. I stood there watching. He kissed her lips softly and heald her hand.

I didn't know what was going on between them, but i was about to find out.

I ran over to Rachel's house and her mom let me in. I ran upstairs and saw Joe at her bed.

"What do you think you're doing?!" I said loudly. Joe turned around and looked at me. "Don't wake her up. I came over to talk to her." Joe said standing up. "I told you to say away from my girl!" I yelled loud enough. Rachel opened her eyes and saw what was going on.

*Rachel's POV*

"I'm just trying to talk to her!" Joe yelled out. "I don't want you to talk to her!" Kevin said pushing Joe a little. Joe pushed him bakc and i jumped up and stood between them. "Move Rachel!' Kevin yelled. "No! Sit down!" I yelled out. Kevin picked me up and put me down. He turned around and pushed Joe again. Joe pushed him harder and Kevin lost it.

Kevin swong his fist at Joe and hit him in the jaw. "Stop it Kevin!" I yelled with tears in my eyes. Joe looked up and hit him in the stomach.

I stood up and stood in between them again. "Stop it! Stop fighting! I'm tired over this!" I yelled. "Move Rach." Joe said. Kevin face turned red and i slapped them both. "What was that for?!" Kevin asked. "For being idiots!" I said. Joe looked at me and pulled me into him. He kissed me on the lips in front of Kevin and Kevin got really mad.

I smacked Joe across the face and i started crying. Kevin looked at me and his face softened up some. "Rachel..we didn't mean to make you cry." Kevin said hugging me. I started to push him away, but he was to strong. "This is what i didn't want." I said looking at Joe.

"What happened while i was gone?" Kevin asked. "I kissed her." Joe said taking the blam for everything. "What.." Kevin started to say. "I kissed him back." I said looking at my feet. Kevin let go of me and looked at me, "You kissed him back?!" Kevin asked in shock. "Kev, i'm sorry...." I said. "Don't be. He must be everything you need if i'm not enough for you. So....i'll leave you two alone." Kevin said walking out.

"Kevin, don't leave. I was stupid. I'm sorry." I said grabbing his hand. Kevin snached his hand away and left the room. Joe put his arm around me and i started crying. He pulled me into him and cried on his chest. He kissed my forehead softly and heald me in his arms.

I didn't know what was happening. All i knew was that Kevin just walked out of my life and everything we could of had, we can't have anymore. Unless this problem is fixed. I missed him already.

OKAY! There's the chapter! :D

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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New Post 7/31/2008 4:22 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 
awwww! poor rachel & kevin

but i also feel bad for joe too! D:

POST MORE REAALLLLYY SOOOOON! even though you like just posted haha


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New Post 7/31/2008 5:35 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Poor Rachel! Poor Kevin! Poor Joe! Post More Soon!

~Cheyenne~

 
New Post 7/31/2008 6:46 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Chapter 16

*Rachel's POV*

Joe heald me as i cried. He looked at me, "Everythings gonna work out. It will all be okay." I looked up at him and smiled. He leaned down and kissed me softly, but i pulled away and shooked my head no. "What?" Joe asked. "I don't think i wanna get in a realasionship right now. I'm sorry Joe." I said softly. "It's okay..." Joe said dissapointed.

He wrapped his arms around me and i stopped crying after a while. We walked down stairs and sat on the couch. He put in a movie and i cuddled next to the side of the couch. I rested my head on the arm rest and feel asleep during. After a while i heard a door open then close. I looked up and saw Kevin standing there.

"Mom want's you home." He said looking at Joe. Looking at Kevin made me wanna cry. Joe stood up and hugged me and gave me a peck on the cheek.

I watched as him and Kevin kept a distence from each other. When they closed the door. I laid my head back down and started to cry. Why was i being put through this?

I stood up and walked up to my room. I looked out the window and Kevin shook his head and closed the blinds.

I crawled into my bed and started crying. I heard a knock at the front door and i stood up and walked to it. I got to the door and opened it. Carissa was standing there smiling. She looked at me and frowned, "What's wrong?" She asked. I started crying and she hugged me.

"Joe and Kevin..i don't know." I said crying hard. We walked over to the couch and sat down. we talked for hours. She looked at her watch.

"I have to meet Nick at his house. Where going to the movies then out to eat." She said smiling. She hugged me and turned and looked at me, "If you need anything call me." "Isn't your phone suppost to be off during the movie?" I asked. "Who ever listens to those rules." She said smiling. She hugged me one more time then walked over and meet Nick. Kevin and Joe were also standing at there door way.

Joe looked over at me and winked. Tears filled my eyes when i looked at Kevin. Why did i miss him so much? A tear feel down my face slowly as Kevin looked at me. I walked inside and closed the door.

I walked in the kitchen and made myself a peanut butter sandwhich. I finished after 30 minutes over just looking at it.

I laid down and drifted off to sleep.

OKAY! There's a chapter! :D I hope u liike it. Nick and Carissa's date is in the next chapter! :D

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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New Post 7/31/2008 7:27 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Poor Rachel! Post More Soon!

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New Post 8/1/2008 5:22 PM
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Re: Does age really matter? (Chapter 1 is up! Read and tell me what you think!) 

Chapter 17

*Carissa's POV*

Nick and soon got to the theator. It was quiet at first but then he through some pop corn at me. When the movie started we kept laughing at the sad part and peole started getting mad. About in the middle of the movie he grabbed my hand and we left.

It was late now. He took me to red lobster. I order shrimp pasta and Nick ordered the sea food plater. My eyes got big when i looked at it.

"How long have you lived in Texas?" Nick asked. "Too long. But i grew to love it. I think it's beautiful here." I siad with a smile. Nick smiled at me and we both started to eat. When we finish. He paid for the check and we walked to the car. Mr.Jonas cam to pick us up.

"Did you have a fun time?" Mr.Jonas asked when we got in. Nick put his arm around me, "Is was fun. I would like to do it again. When we get back from tour." Nick said. "How long is your tour?" I asked. "A year." Nick said softly. "I can wait." I said smiling. Nick's face lit up and he kissed my cheek making me blush.

He took me home and kissed me good night. "Wait." I said before i went in. I pulled out a pen and wrote my number on his hand. "When do you leave?" I asked finishing the number. "Day after tomorrow." Nick said. "I'll wait for you." I said smiling. I quickly kissed his cheek and walked inside.

*The next day*

*Rachel's POV*

I woke up the next morning still on the couch. I looked at my clock, 9:31 am. I stood up and walked into the kitchen. I was cutting up a banana when Joe knocked at the door. "Come in." I said looking at the door. Joe walked in, "Morning." He walked over and picked up a peice of banana. He leaned on the couter and watched me finish cutting it. I put it in a bowl and grabbed a fork.

"Where's you're mom?" Joe asked pulling up a chair. "Work.." I said. "Dad?" Joe asked. "Work..." I said again.

I sat at the table and Joe sat next to me. I started to eat, but then i put the fork down. Joe looked at me, "Are you gonna eat, Rach?" "I'm not hungry anymore. You can have it." I said crossing my arms over my chest. "Kevin is just like this Can't you two just make up already so we can all move on with our lives. Maybe if you got over him, then you might date me." Joe said. I sighed, "I don't wanna talk about it." Joe stood up and kissed my head. He walked out the door and i sat there be myself.

I sat on the couch and pulled out the laptop. About an hour later, someone knocked at the door. "Come in!" I yelled. Kevin walked around the kitchen and looked at me. I closed the laptop and looked at my hands.

He walked over and sat next to me. "We need to talk." He said slowly. I nodded my head. "Rach, i'm leaving tomorrow, for tour." Kevin said. "I know." I said trying to hold back tears. "Remember how i asked you to wait for me?" He asked grabbing my hand. I nodded my head and small smile came to my face. He shook his head no. "Don't. We can't go out. It's never gonna work. We're ...we're just not made for each other. Take a chance and go out with Joe. He's a good guy. You and i...we can't do it." Kevin said.

My heart broke and felt like it dropped and never hit the ground so hard. A tear fell down my face and i looked at our hands. "But..i want to wait for you." I said. "I don't want you to. With what's happened the last few days..." Kevin said stopping and breath, "It will never happen." "You never know till you try, Kevin." I said crying. "I'm sorry." Kevin siad standing up and letting go of my hand. He leaned down and kissed my cheek.

We turn and walk to the door. He turned and looked at me and i looked back at him, "I'll be waiting tomorrow if you want to say goodbye to me." I looked at him and tear fell down my face, "Goodbye." Kevin eyes filled with tears and he left. He left me.

Okay..the end is sad..but i hope u guys like it! :D

♥Rachel (a.k.a. Mrs.Joe Jonas♥)


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