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woah. i don't like Jacob. iwonder what she'll choose i hope she chooses Joe... Post. More. Soon. Please.
Chapter 5
I looked at both of them. I got off of the counter without a word and just started to twalk out of the bathroom. Jake ran and swung me around, "Babe. Please. Let me-" "I'm fine." I mumbled. Some girls started walking in and gave Joe and Jacob funny looks. So they just would turn around and walk out. "No your not. I can see it in you eyes." Jake said brushing my cheek. He leaned down quickly and kissed me holding it longer than i thought he would. I wasn't going to be mean and push him away, but i also wasn't going to give in and kiss him. "Uh. There's a rule. No PDA on school grounds." Joe said looking at me weird. I put my head down and looked at my feet. Jake looked over at Joe, "What they don't know, can't hurt them." Joe made a mocking smerk at Jacob. "Dude, what's your problem?" Jake said. "I care for her." Joe said pointing at me. "Well she's my girlfriend. Now. Back. Off." Jacob said pushing me behind him. "She can be with who ever she wants. Even me." Joe said looking at Jacob. Jake was tense and not relaxing. "Let's skip the rest of school." I said grabbing Jakes hand. He quickly turned and loked at me, "You never skip." He said eyeing me up and down. "Well. I do today. Joe i'll talk to you later." I said giving him a quickly smile. "Hold up." Joe mumbled. "I'll go get mine and your's backpack." Jake said quickly kissing me. He quickly walked out and Joe just looked at me. He stood there without a word. He finally sighed and shook his head. "I'm sorry. He was mad....and i thought-" "No. Go with your boyfriend...have fun....no worrys, Linds." Joe said smiling. "Thanks Joey Cakes." I said smiling back at him. He took two steps and wrapped his arms around me in a hug. Once he let go he quickly kissed the top of my head, "What ever you want." He mumbled. I quickly walked out of the bathroom and out to the parking lot were Jake was. "Hey babe!" he said kissing me quickly. "Where too?" I asked. "Your house." He said smiling. "There's nothing to do there." I groaned. "Oh you'd be suprised." He said smiling bigger. He dragged me up to my room and sat me on my bed. "What are we doing up here?" I asked leaning back on my twin size bed. He laughed and wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me against him. I locked me legs around his waist and my arms around his neck. He picked me up and swung me around. "Hold on. I'm slipping." I laughed. "Ok. Sorry." Jake said laughing. He slipped his hand under my butt and lifted me up a little more. He then moved his other hand to my back and kissed me quickly. He walked from the middle of the room and back to the bed. He put me down softly, but not breaking the kiss, and slipped on the other side of the bed. He pulled me on top of him and started playing with my shirt. "Wait!" I siad breaking the kiss. "What?" He asked. "I know what i wanna do." I siad smiling. "Oh really. Let's hear it." He said smiling. I smiled and quickly kissed him.
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wat's she gonna do???????? AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i have to know!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 6 (This is for Izzy...she just HAD to know. lol.)
"Right hand red!" Jake called. "WHAT! OH COME ON!!!" I stretch my right hand and Jake quickly tickled my shotmache making me laugh and fall. "YEAH! I won! TWISTER BABY!!!! AGAIN!" Jake called laughing and dancing around. "No silly!" I laughed. "You made me fall. It was your fault." I said standing up. "Well....rematch. missy." Jake said wrapping his arms around my waist. "Stinker." I mumbled. He laughed and quickly kissed my cheek. "Movie?" He asked. "Sure. You can't beat me at that...unlike twister......i blam the dots." I siad pointing at the mat. "Or the oporator..." Jake said laughing. I laughed with him and I quickly poped in a movie. I sat down next to him and he laid down with his head in my lap looking at the TV. I started playing with his hair and running my fingers in it. "HOME!" Dad called busting though the door. "Hey dad." I whispered. Jacob mumbled Hey and dad just looked at me for a minute, "UH HEM! Off my daughter!" "DAD!" "Sorry." "Jake. No. Don't be sorry...you're fine." I said. "NO HE'S NOT! Youve been dating him for 24 hours....not even!" Dad yelled. "More like 3 months!" As soon as i said it my eyes got big. "How long?!!" "Jake. I think you should go home. See you tomorrow." I said quickly hugging him. He leaned down to kiss me. But dad made a growling noise and Jake stopped and just walked out with out word. "DAD! Seriously?? Growling at my boyfriend????" I yelled. "YOU'RE GROUNDED! YOUR ROOM FOR 3 WEEKS!!!" I turned and ran up to my room. "Wait....cell phone." Dad heald out his hadn for my phone. I smacked it on his palm and ran up to my room. As soon as I slammed the door. I looked out my window into Joseph's room. The blinds were closed. I turned to my dresser and started digging though it. Till i found what i was looking for. Some walki talki looking thing. I turned it on....and clicked the call button. Hopefully Joe still had his. I waited a minute and then Joe's blinds flew open and Joe was standing there with a confused look and the other walki talki in his hand. I laughed and motioned him over. I needed to talk to my best friend.
Hi. I'm new here. Holy hot dang, I love this fic.
I love Twister. I love Twister fics. I'm not into this Jacob guy. He seems too much like Jake from Twilight (Team Edward, like forever). I lllllluuuurve your fic. Which I'm sure you can tell, because my first post is on YOUR fic. Be proud, Rach. be proud.
Question in general to everybody: Are there any good Jemi fics here? I'm a huge Jemi fan. JoeOC is cool too, but Jemi pones.
Maggie
I love twister too! Hooray! A new reader! I don't think anyone has written a Jemi ff yet. Because I would know. I read everything (sorta). But you could write one! Post mroe soon Rach! Always. . .Razz
YAHHH! NEW READER!!!! I feel honored. :]] Sorry. no chapter today. i have a basketball game.
Maybe tomorrow. hopfully.....WHICH WILL BE MY B-DAY!!! :]] *happy dances* Thanks for the comments...and twister....yeah...it pones! lol.
Joey cakes, lol. We never call him that anymore. I think we should bring it back. Lol. Post more soon!